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ammorah525



Joined: 30 Oct 2004
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 8:14 pm    Post subject: Dmoo3...Tears  

I may be sad this time but...i wrote it from experiences and situations i really lived and i came out with :
Tears analysis...
Very warm drops.. Coming from the very deep inside u.. Coming from between heart and mind. Coming outside your eyes.. Going over your warm, reddy cheeks. Sometimes they are coming over you..While u r depressed, bad tempered, very sad, very lost, heartbroken, very pained or very happy.. It is tears.
Tears.. Those salty drops of liquid, those flow from the eyes to the world of yours. You may burst into tears, or they may visit you so slowly.. Romantically, with the highest point of anger or even joy. Some people consider them the very weakest mood of the human being, but I' m against strongly. When tears overcome you; you are in the truest mood with yourself& the most sincere, honest& loyal phase or moment between u& your self. As no one can know or even predict what makes u cry? Or what made those tears? None, but only u, just u. You may tell your best friend whereas s/he may or may not understand u...it all depends. You probably want to tell anyone; just to reveal the heavy mountain lying over your heart or mind. To make someone sharing u the secret. You may or not find that person; it also depends. That happens when u r very bored& depressed.
It's completely different when u lose someone whom u love, very dear or so close to u. A terrible paining sensation. You feel all the meanings of loneliness, sadness& cleaving. The scene of losing her/him is always towards your eyes. You remember only the sweet memories and forget the bad ones completely. There is only a glance of her/his eyes, which has a meaningful message that always chases and perplexes u. You are trying to understand the inner message that the eyes were carrying, but the puzzle stays forever with u &gets your tears out.
When you feel very lost& bored, you don't know why that sense attacks u strongly? No one perceives the answer, so the one coexists with that phase till it passes. Then every thing will be all right, but the questions yield here& there, paining your heart &shedding your tears...I know that the previous lines are full of sadness, but to where can u escape from reality u feel& live?
The matter is more complex now.. When your heart is filled with happiness. We call it "delectation tears". When the one succeeds, loves, marries...etc. The pearly drops with the cries of joy make a new, cheerful woven atmosphere.. And life does not stop at an end.
Tears may attack u when you fall in some one's love, but u can never tell her/him. It's the hardest love in the world; as your emotions are all imprisoned in your heart and you cannot say a word. You can just talk to your lover's phantom or his shadow in your imagination. In a trial to reveal or to relieve your painful feeling of may losing that lover. It may turn to be a disaster-a huge one-if it went against your own will and losing the lover whom her/his love was the sweetest dream of your life. Then you fall into despair, melancholy and feeling lonely even if you have all the world in your hands.. It’ s worthless now. You are now awaking from your paradise and moved to hell. Every moment from the very beginning was tearful. Not only the one side love is a sorrow... Destroyer of life as well, but also life doesn't care for you and does not end at your loss.
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hebostic



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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:36 pm    Post subject:  

i imagine tears are like wet precious diamonds that comes out from living things, which can be people or animals from a deep feelings.
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mohfathy



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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:55 am    Post subject: Re: Dmoo3  

ammorah525 wrote:
.. Coming from between heart and mind. was

Quite wrong
didn't u study Anatomy,or at least sciences in high school? :twisted:
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mohfathy



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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:56 am    Post subject:  

hebostic wrote: i imagine tears are like wet precious diamonds that comes out from living things, which can be people or animals from a deep feelings.
good description
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Monica



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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:16 am    Post subject: Re: Dmoo3  

Sweetheart...that was very deep!!
I wish you tears of JOY only forever!!!
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hebostic



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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 4:38 pm    Post subject:  

i think that ist the only diamond u dont find it in the rock of a mountain or buy or someone buy it for u, ist only u made when u be effected from something or feelings, and tears are the more u let it go the more it valued to u, but doeasnt mean if u didnt cry alot on something ist mean it didint worth crying or when a boy cry over something very few tears it measn he didnt feel alot about it,,,, well a single tear that run slowly from ur cheeks can be worth a hundred tears that flow alot from ur eyes.
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The Egyptian



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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 5:47 pm    Post subject:  

:pale: :pale: :pale: :pale:
:thumleft: :thumleft: :thumleft: :thumleft:
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ammorah525



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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 7:47 pm    Post subject: To Mohfathy  

Mo7amed,
Actually i studied anatomy and science coz i was 3elmy 3loom. But My philosopher, I wanna tell you that the expression here is targeted and meant to an imaginative area where the anatomy can't ever reach.
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ammorah525



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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 8:10 pm    Post subject: hebostic  

So well description. Tears are actually the way out from all the pressure around. They are just like the oasis in the desert and the light in the darkest dark sometimes.
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Luana



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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:52 am    Post subject:  

Hi Ammorah,

I don't know how to paste what the other person wrote..so i will write this:

WHAT MONICA WROTE IS RIGHT ON!!!

You write very deep things and that only means that your heart is very precious and you mind rocks!

Thank you for sharing that :D

Luana
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mohfathy



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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:37 am    Post subject: Re: To Mohfathy  

ammorah525 wrote: Mo7amed,
Actually i studied anatomy and science coz i was 3elmy 3loom. But My philosopher, I wanna tell you that the expression here is targeted and meant to an imaginative area where the anatomy can't ever reach.
tayeb ya miro :wink:
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ammorah525



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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 3:16 pm    Post subject:  

Luana,

thnx a milion for that description, but i don't desrve all that.:D :oops:
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LovingAngel



Joined: 22 Nov 2004
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:51 pm    Post subject:  

well, i wud say here ammorah wrote a good expressing of tears.
It's a gift from God. we cant thank him wut he has gifted us.
and that wut the Holy Book Qur'an says:
فبأى آلاء ربكما تكذبان

So all the ppl shud be thankful To Allah Almighty for the great Gift he gave us.
:)
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Monica



Joined: 10 Mar 2004
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 3:05 pm    Post subject:  

Ameeeeeen
LovingAngel wrote: well, i wud say here ammorah wrote a good expressing of tears.
It's a gift from God. we cant thank him wut he has gifted us.
and that wut the Holy Book Qur'an says:
فبأى آلاء ربكما تكذبان

So all the ppl shud be thankful To Allah Almighty for the great Gift he gave us.
:)
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Guest






Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 12:49 am    Post subject:  

Amira, i wanna say that ur words touched me deeply inside. i think u described what really happens..
wishing u always TEARS OF JOY..
wishing u Allah's love & care..
urs,
enas
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